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The presentation is really well done so impact rates high.
I really like that you used white-line views. Very creative and skilled for making the air intake louvers. Very nice use and moderation of technobabble.

I don't know how original this is, so I took off one for that.

The lack of color and/or tone for the main view lessens the visual appeal. I know and see that you have SOME color there, but I think a lot of detail and "feel" of the craft is lost by going with too dark and/or monotone a tone. I am also saddened that you went with a somewhat polarized canopy.

Some of your sweetest detail work is in the back, which is only seen in white line views. ?!?

So I took "vision" literally, thus lowering it.

I top out at 4 stars leaving 5 for truly exceptional "mind blowing" images. Not a lacking on your part but my own conception to leave a nebulous realm to inspire artists to greater achievement.